Review for “Sweet Tooth” by MacFlan
Reviewed By: FL95
Reviewed By: FL95
SUMMARY: Come to Pink Cookie, where porn never tasted this good. Erotic baker, Edward Cullen has a new obsession in the form of Bella Swan. Will his buttercream satisfy her sweet tooth? AH, OOC, Comedy/Romance. Collab between BellaFlan and Mac214.
Okay, so, when I first found out that miss BellaFlan was writing this story, I knew I’d be reading it, since “Becoming Bella Swan” had me happy giddy laughing my ass off with confusion at every chapter in a very oh my fucking god what in the hell is gonna happen in the end, kind of way.
Then I found out she was Collaborating with Mac214, who writes a very witty Scottward story, and I must say, I laughed my ass off in just the first chapter of that craziness.
Anyway!
Needless to say, it didn’t take much twisting of my arm(s) to get me to read Sweet Tooth.
Edward is a bakery chef, who specializes in making…um…highly inappropriate cakes and…things (penis cake, anyone?) and oh yeah, has a hard on every other paragraph for the sugar addicted, cute as a button Bella Swan in this one and it cracks me up quite often to read the sugar coated (pun intended) innuendos that are shot back and forth between the two of them throughout the story.
Edward crushes on Bella, of course, but the love struck baker seems to work through his day dreams by creating a fantasy Bella to talk dirty to, so he can practice voicing his dirty, dirty needs for his life sized muse. What makes him even more endearing to me, is that, sometimes he gets caught just as the real life Bella shows herself again and inevitably, hears what he has to say.
Not that she minds.
Enter Jacob Black.
A fucking health inspector.
Who catches them in the middle of…certain…
*clears throat*
Well, I’m not gonna ruin it for you.
If you like to laugh, spit soda out of your nose at random, crazy, geniously written, hilarious FanFiction, and read to just enjoy a fun ride, this is the fic for you because these two ladies have the best sense of humor when it comes to writing the funny and it flows…so well.
Plus they are really good people, to boot.
Hope you read them, if you don’t, you’re missing out.
Just sayin’.
Peace Love & Patron!
FL95
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4 comments:
great review I will be sure to check it out! ;)
Thank you so much!!! This review totally made my day today. ily xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Flanny (aka, the "Flan" in MacFlan)
In best Adam Sandler voice - *Must read about the pink coockie!*
Well, FL95, I love your stories, so I'm sure I'll love anything you rec. This story sounds hilarious and hot, two of my favorite things when it comes to fics. Thanks for the review.
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